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Old 07-09-2019, 21:18
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Mình muốn nói là "Tôi muốn tìm một người có thể cùng tôi đi tới tận cùng của thế giới" thì viết là "I'm looking for someone, who can go with me to the end of the world." có đúng không hả mọi người.
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Old 07-09-2019, 22:36
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Mình muốn nói là "Tôi muốn tìm một người có thể cùng tôi đi tới tận cùng của thế giới" thì viết là "I'm looking for someone, who can go with me to the end of the world." có đúng không hả mọi người.
to the edge of the world. Mình nghĩ vầy đúng hơn
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Old 08-09-2019, 00:09
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Just WriteFreely!

Iron Musk
An interesting person I've recently known/ learned about is Elon Musk. Although he is very famous, I only know about him after I read his biography.
The reason why I'm interested in him is that he is a creative person. He has miryad ideas, many of them became true that're contributing to help humankind. An example is Tesla which is a smart electric car maker/ manufacturer. Tesla's cars don't use fossil fuels so they don't emit polluting gases to the atsmosphere.
The second reason why I like him is because he is a strong man. He's never given up in any difficult situations. He has failed many times in his career before getting where he is right now/ becoming such a successful person. He even lost one of his sons.
For those reasons, I believe he is the real-life Iron Man and an inspiration of my life.

There are some bits that sound weird and I would love to correct them for you but maybe it's better to leave it for the pros lol.

P.s. It's kind of funny that you keep using "myriad". Personally, it's good that you're trying to use uncommon words but sometimes those words can make your writing sound unnatural. So... maybe try to learn words that are being used by actual English speakers. I'm sure something about tech or whatever is much more impressive than a random passage with a bunch of weird words.

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Old 08-09-2019, 02:07
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Could someone help me to correct my essay? I just do it as a stereotype (1).

Many people think that the government should spend more money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree?


When it comes to taking actions to tackle traffic congestion, options diverge greatly. Many people think that the government should spend more money on constructing railways or subways instead of roads. I understand why they have that perspective but I would like to argue the benefits and drawbacks it brings up.
On one hand, constructing more railways and subways is a part of the solutions to cope with congestion so I agree that the government should spend more state budget for it. It helps to ease the condition by reducing the amount of people on the roads in rush hours and let people from outside enter the city more easily. Therefore, we can deal more effectively with population growth and density. (2)
On the other hand, I consider investing more in railways and subways is just a temporary solution because of its limited capacity while roads could be extended easily and is much cheaper to construct and could serve a lot more people. In addition, railway and subway lines are fixed so you can only go to places that have stations, which is completely opposite to the flexibility of roads.
Therefore, I think railways and roads are both worth spending the government budget on but we have to scrutinize and evaluate closely in each specific circumstance.
1. I don't really get what stereotype means here lol.
2. I don't think building a subway system will reduce population growth or density. Like... people would still have more babies if we had a fully operational subway network.

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P.s. are my changes any good? Can someone take a further look into this? Please. Thank you. .

P.p.s. btw, I am looking for good English teachers or centers in Sai Gon. My target is getting at least an 8 in IELTS. Budget is around 20 millions. Writing and speaking will be my main focus. I intend to take the test next year.

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Old 08-09-2019, 02:14
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1. I don't really get what stereotype means here lol.

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" steam" is a spelling mistake. The correct is "stem". thanks
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Old 08-09-2019, 13:06
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1. I don't really get what stereotype means here lol.
2. I don't think building a subway system will reduce population growth or density. Like... people would still have more babies if we had a fully operational subway network.

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P.s. are my changes any good? Can someone take a further look into this? Please. Thank you. .

P.p.s. btw, I am looking for good English teachers or centers in Sai Gon. My target is getting at least an 8 in IELTS. Budget is around 20 millions. Writing and speaking will be my main focus. I intend to take the test next year.

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In my opinion, people migrate in an urban center to look for jobs, if the public transportation system is well enough, they could live in rural areas with no worry about going late to work. Therefore, the number of people migrating in the city would be controlled or reduced. As a result, the population density figure would be stemmed or reduced.

My english is still not good. Please give me some advice to improve it
ý mình là gia tăng dân số vật lý, không phải tự nhiên

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Old 08-09-2019, 18:56
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In my opinion, people migrate to an urban center to look for jobs. If the public transportation system is good enough, they can live in rural areas with no worry about being late to work. Therefore, the number of people migrating to the city would be controlled or reduced. As a result, the population density figure would be stemmed or reduced.

My english is still not good. Please give me some advice to improve it
ý mình là gia tăng dân số vật lý, không phải tự nhiên
This might sound like a cliche but... all you have to do is practice. At home or at an English center, it doesn't matter. Still, you will improve much faster with a proper teacher though.

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Old 09-09-2019, 15:41
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population growth of two countries, China and India, in the period from the year 2000 to 2050.
From the graphs, India is predicted to take place of China as the highest populous country in the world in 2030.
As for China, the population of its starts at 1300 billion in 2000, rises steadily and will reach a peak at about 1450 billion in 2030 and then drops slightly to under 1400 in 2050. In the meantime, India starts the year 2000 at the population of 1000 billion and will replace China becoming the countries with the highest population in the world in 2030, and be predicted to reach the population of 1600 billion by the year 2050.
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Old 09-09-2019, 21:24
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Please explain, I don't understand grammar in this sentence.

Diurnal migrants have also been shown to use geographic features such as mountain ranges.
I have searched your sentence on the Internet and the whole sentence is "diurnal migrants have also been shown to use geographic features such as mountain ranges or seacoasts as other cues for navigation".

https://dictionary.cambridge.org/dic...y/english/show
to prove something or make the truth or existence of something known:
She has shown herself (to be) a highly competent manager.
Những người di cư được biết đến với việc sử dụng các thông số địa vật lý như chiều dài dãy núi hay bờ biển như một dấu hiệu khác để xác định phương hướng

Mình cũng không chắc đâu,
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Old 10-09-2019, 00:31
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Do you like people taking photos of you?

As a child I was always a bit shy when it came to having my photo taken, so I would have said that I didn't like it. These days, if someone wants to take a photo of me, I don't mind at all.
Cho em hỏi tại sao ở đây dùng would have said với các bác ơi ?
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