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pepepepe 13-11-2012 21:16

[Giúp đỡ] Tìm lỗi sai trong bài tập tiếng anh này giúp em
 
TIẾNG ANH EM GÀ LẮM MÀ CÔ BẮT VIẾT BÀI VIẾT .... :canny::canny:

. H VIẾT XONG RỒI MÀ KO BIK SAI CHỖ NÀO KO NỮA CÁC THÁNH ENGLISH GIÚP TÌM CHỖ SAI VÀ CÓ GÌ CHỈ NẾU CÓ SAI CÁCH DÙNG HAY NGỮ CẢNH JJJ ĐÓ THÌ GIÚP LUN NHA :pudency::pudency:

HẬU TA NEPTUNE :pudency:

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At the university , I met a lot of new friend but the one who made me impressed is X . His appearance is not special , he not handsome, he is fat and short , not generous man but his confident and humorous made me impressed , he can perform in a crowed place ,make another people laugh, . In my opinion maybe he is an optimist person , a team player , a sweatheart . Sometimes the teacher give us so many homework , make us fell so tired but his humorous make anyone feel better so we can do homework well . He love talking with cute girl , playing game and sleeping . His dream is being a rich man and have a big family . Although I have just met him and I don’t know much about him but also I’m think he is a good guy , a good friend . Each day goes, we become closer. He is very kind not only with me but also with everyone. I hope my friendship grows up and forever even over the longest distance.

pepepepe 13-11-2012 21:20

Re: [Giúp đỡ] Tìm lỗi sai trong bài tập tiếng anh này giúp em
 
chìm nhanh vậy :sosad:

Wise Blue 13-11-2012 21:30

Re: [Giúp đỡ] Tìm lỗi sai trong bài tập tiếng anh này giúp em
 
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Originally Posted by pepepepe (Post 52677125)
TIẾNG ANH EM GÀ LẮM MÀ CÔ BẮT VIẾT BÀI VIẾT .... :canny::canny:

. H VIẾT XONG RỒI MÀ KO BIK SAI CHỖ NÀO KO NỮA CÁC THÁNH ENGLISH GIÚP TÌM CHỖ SAI VÀ CÓ GÌ CHỈ NẾU CÓ SAI CÁCH DÙNG HAY NGỮ CẢNH JJJ ĐÓ THÌ GIÚP LUN NHA :pudency::pudency:
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At the(bỏ the) university , I met ===> meet/come across a lot of new friends but the one who made me(bỏ) impressed is X . His appearance is not special , he is not handsome, he is fat and short , not agenerous man /guybut his confident and humorous made me impressed (lập từ,sai), he can perform in a crowed place ,make another ==>other people laugh, . In my opinions , maybe(ko cần) he is an optimist person , a team player , a sweatheart (dafuqs do u mean) . Sometimes the teacher give ===>gave us so many homework , make us fell so tired but his humorous make anyone feel better so we can do homework well . He loves talking with cute girls , playing game and sleeping . His dream is being ===> to become/becoming a rich man and have a big family . Although I have just met him and I don’t know much about him but also I’m think he is a good guy , a good friend . Each day goes, we become closer. He is very kind not only with me but also with everyone else. I hope my ===>our friendship grows up and forever even over the longest distance. (dafuqs is this)
HẬU TA NEPTUNE :pudency:

:gach::gach::gach:

pepepepe 13-11-2012 21:31

Re: [Giúp đỡ] Tìm lỗi sai trong bài tập tiếng anh này giúp em
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by Wise Blue (Post 52677551)
:gach::gach::gach:

ngàn lần cám ơn :stick::stick::stick:

boysh 13-11-2012 21:33

Re: [Giúp đỡ] Tìm lỗi sai trong bài tập tiếng anh này giúp em
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by pepepepe (Post 52677125)
At the university , I met a lot of new friend but the one who made me impressed is X . His appearance is not special , he not handsome, he is fat and short , not generous man but his confident and humorous made me impressed , he can perform in a crowed place ,make another people laugh, . In my opinion maybe he is an optimist person , a team player , a sweatheart . Sometimes the teacher give us so many homework , make us fell so tired but his humorous make anyone feel better so we can do homework well . He love talking with cute girl , playing game and sleeping . His dream is being a rich man and have a big family . Although I have just met him and I don’t know much about him but also I’m think he is a good guy , a good friend . Each day goes, we become closer. He is very kind not only with me but also with everyone. I hope my friendship grows up and forever even over the longest distance.:

Chỉ có thể giúp thớt tới đó :sweat:. Bài này câu văn lũng cũng quá :sweat:

- friends
- he is not
- confidence
- humor
- crowded
- gave/gives
- humor
- loves
- having
- bỏ từ also đi
- I

ThangNaoBanThongNoHoaLuon 13-11-2012 21:39

Re: [Giúp đỡ] Tìm lỗi sai trong bài tập tiếng anh này giúp em
 
Ko biết là academic writing hay free writing đây, academic thì 0đ cmn nhé :))

pepepepe 13-11-2012 21:55

Re: [Giúp đỡ] Tìm lỗi sai trong bài tập tiếng anh này giúp em
 
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Originally Posted by ThangNaoBanThongNoHoaLuon (Post 52677883)
Ko biết là academic writing hay free writing đây, academic thì 0đ cmn nhé :))

cơ mà em còn phải học nhiều ạ . em dân khối A nên ngu anh lắm :sosad:


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